Awhh, that was really sad. He obviously meant a lot to you. I would just suggest using better vocabulary to help the reader feel more specifically what you are trying to acheive. Other than that nice job hunny. 4/5

Sad...yet good job..got your thoughts for him well across through this work
but last stanza hert=hurt ,and then a few other errors too...but all over...fair job!
kp writing!
xxPoojaxx

This is sad. :( but anyway.. there are some erors in the poem.

if it wouldn't 'hert' anyone
hurt?

And just a suggestion.

i would be with forever
(I would be with always and forever)

Anyway I really don't like short poems but I like this one you really expressed a lot in this poem well done.

*Sorry about that. I forgot something*

i would be with forever
and for always
(I would be with you/him always and forever)

I'm sure this poem means a lot to you
and it was an okay write for me
I think to improve you could use more imagery

"with the loss has [brought] every one down
slowly trying to [regain],[reminisce or cherish] the memories"

"if it wouldn't [hurt] anyone"

Other than those grammatical errors, I'd like to review this work with better illustrations in the future.