Hey,
Firstly just want to apologise for the lateness of this comment.
Anyways this poem was really heartwarming and touching. The title catches the readers attention, it makes the reader wonder what the subject of this poem is. So the reader reads on. You had a good rhyme scheme with rhyming couplets. The first stanza introduces the reader to what the poem is about. i have to say my favourite stanza was the third one, it had brilliant emotion and it creates... i guess hope for those who are greieving. Then you go on to kinda talk about her life. It brings back these happy moments. A really really touching read about her death. It shows grief, the faith that she is in a better place, as well as a look into her life. A touching read. RIP to her. xx

Mother, I will miss you so
^ I think this was a bit out of flow because it needed a few more syllables.

I'm so sorry for your loss, but if it's any concolation this was a brilliant poem. The flow was great, the descriptions were unique and heartfelt. The emotion was oozing out from each line and the poem just had a amazing feel to it. I lvoed it. 5/5