Wow that was cute and I could totally tell that Heart is now pissed at Head, thats really funny. |
by Vanessa
Wow that was extremely deep, and again the emtion was strong and powerful. I loved all of it every single part, every thing fit perfectly togather, and the word choice was great. You really did a great job on these. perfectly done 5/5 |
by George
And the conflict grows...I've really loved this...its quite a series, and so true! Its emotionally intense, yet in the manner of its presentation it becomes somewhat comical...wonderful! |
by Debbie
The heart sounds very wise here. Hmm. Indeed, it is when you get hurt that you grow stronger. When you gain experience from past's mistakes and triumphs, you grow up and mature into a wonderful being. This was utterly brilliant! I, however, fear to say that I disagreed with this statement, "Every single time She has managed to put herself back together with no help from you." The mind certainly is conducive to the individual's healing, I dare say. Without the mind and sensible reasons, how would the individual properly sort things out? Hmm, I suppose the heart made a mistake there... But then again, I'll reiterate what I've said in my first review: the heart and the mind are synonymous with each other. :) Can't wait to read more! Love, Debbie |
OOO.. very deep.. I think this is a very good thing your doing.. Giving people the insite on how the "Heart" or "Mind" thinks.. |
by Sydney
Oh I like it. Its full of emotion and so deep. It makes me ponder a lot. Your choice of words were good. Overall I thought it was really great XD. |
by aDORKable x3
I love this! I thought I had read this one before my grounding but I guess I was mistaken. Great job hun! I love these! One to the next one! |