Good try. keep writing. The word 'said' is misspelled in one line as 'sad'

Hey gr8 work its amazing how many ppl on here write poems about having there heart broken the worlds more full of sadness than i thought wow! anyways check some of my poems out if u like:)

AWW!! IM SORRY!! I GO TROUTH THE SAME THING.. EVERY GUY THAT I HAVE EVER LIKED HAS BROKEN MY HEART!! THANKZ FOR THE COMMENT!!

I can so totally relate to this poem my favorite one keep up the good work