by NeroB00 May 28, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
These are the reasons i cry, when the pain is too deep that it burns my insides. when my days are too dark, and my nights are too long, when my body's too weak and my strength isnt strong. when the worlds problems become my burdens, and the "It'll get betters" stop working. when i stop asking GOD for help and just sit in place, and the hurt thats there cant be erased.... |
by Untamed
5/5 good poem. keep up the great work. |
by 0laura0
The lines in this are amazing, |
Very heart wrecking, i can feel pain from this poem... amazing |
by Kait
I loved this poem. its was really good!! keep it up. 5/5 |
Wow that was good flow and transition, good words good reasons 5/5 maybe u can read one of mine. |