This is a fantastic piece, I loved how you wrote it like a story almost. The flow was awesome and so was the word choice. So many kids have to go through the same problems this poem talks about, a lot of dad's are losers I guess. Excellent job 5/5

Hey,
An excellent poem, It was just like a sad little story and i think that many can relate to it.. the flow is absolutely perfect, I just love this poem! 5/5
kisses stephanie

I loved this one, i thought it was unique and very different, its so sad but flows so perfectly, an aweosme piece
Well done
Love Tara-Kay
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