Good poem...just make sure to watch your spelling and grammer
it ws kind of hard to read at the end you may wanna touch it up a bit with the spelling and grammer..just a suggestion other than that

nice job!

love
~*~Shannon~*~

P.S. if you get the chance..check out a couple of my poems too!

Good job il iked it screw the grammer ah well but its good ~melissa~
maybe you can check out someof my poems to