Comments : Every Lil' Thing

  • 17 years ago

    by XxMoonLightxX

    Good poem...just make sure to watch your spelling and grammer
    it ws kind of hard to read at the end you may wanna touch it up a bit with the spelling and grammer..just a suggestion other than that

    nice job!

    love
    ~*~Shannon~*~

    P.S. if you get the chance..check out a couple of my poems too!

  • Good job il iked it screw the grammer ah well but its good ~melissa~
    maybe you can check out someof my poems to