by White Chocolate Dynamite May 29, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
A special world for you and me, |
by Kristin
I really enjoyed reading this poem it was fantastic |
by Katrina
At one point it was a little forced on the rhyming the flow was nice and this poem you used stronger words! |
Well w/e i liked it, i thought it was a great poem. the flow doesnt really seem that off to me, but i know nothing... well 5/5 always |
by Shelby
This is a really good poem Nathan, dang i just wish i was that good lol.!! ttyl peace |
It doesnt matter about the flow, as long as u got the emotion and ur feelings through, then its still a good poem. i liked it, it flowed in it own little way, but still i dont think that matters. it was short, sweet and got ur point across. 5/5 always |