by Robert May 29, 2007
category :
Dark, fantasy /
other
Pushed and I step back to recoup, |
by Not
I LOVE THIS POEM , MAYBE BECAUSE OF ALL THE ANGER AND RAGE IN IT, I THINK THAT PUT THE EMOTION INTO YOUR WRITE WHICH MADE IT SO GREAT...!!!...5/5 |
by Jenni Marie
Okay..how I love this. |
by xxSuicidalxx
Good poem...like it....you just need...erm...spacing maybe...very desriptive however, good work! |
Honestly, some parts of this poem completely threw me off. I mean, in some lines you have great descriptions and truly dark atmosphere, and then you make some unoriginal, obvious rhyme which completely ruins whole effect. |
by Fsams
Beautiful poem with great rhymes and the dark component. LOved the way it flows and superb work. |