Heart felt and very emtional, the word choice is strong, and the flow was great, you have done an excellent job, once agin. please keep writting and I will keep reading 5/5

FIrst stanza?
Forced.
I think that could be changed into something better.
For example:
I didn't liket he part the you repeated
"I"

Looking through the window,
I can feel the cool breeze,
Hear the rain falling down,
It's cold, I could freeze.

I don't know.
That's me being sloppy :P

Second stanza?
That actually sounds like a song.
LOL.
Stormy weather.

Third stanza.
Confusing.

Third stanza.
Kind of forced, kind of not.

Last line?
Just weird.
I didn't like your ending...
It's just... I dunno.
Sorry I can't explain.
But dearest, I will still give you a 4/5 :]

Overall, it was rather a fine piece of work. The two stanzas at the end merely needs tightening up in its lines in order to improve its flow. Other than that, the fact that you put this piece in the sections "poems about life" made me think that this is not just a love poem nor was it about romance, but rather, about reality. Nice work, nonetheless. :)

The first stanza, Seemed kind of forced to me. I found you used the word I too much.
I liked the emotion you portrayed although personally I can not relate to this poem I'm sure there are many who can. I found the flow to be Rocky in some places. I think this is due to the lack of syllables in each line, by adding extra words to some lines it would make the flow alot better. The vocab you used i found to be simple but effective to well done on that. Well done overall i give this a 4/5 because it was good.

Aww that was sad.. That had a lot of emotion in it. i liked this a lot.

It rhymed and flowed really well.

Your vocab was ok it worked with what you wrote.

I give you a 5/5 because i really liked this. it was a really cute poem..

There are some lines that i really like it.. it has a great expressing those words. there are also some lines are off for me.. but inspite of, it was still great flow. so all over i think u deserve to get 5/5 well done

Good poem...though the first stanza seemd a li'l forced...n the last stanza was sweet...some particular lines were lovely..very cute..u've expressed yourselff well...due to which...i think i can give u a 5/5
=)
xxPoojaxx

Great poem. the flow was nice. so much emotion. well done!!!!!!! 5/5

~Chelsea~

I miss those summer nights,
sitting with you under the stars,
I wish one day we meet again,
I hope you are happy where ever you are.

great writing i loved you poem take care

I liked it. The flow was a little off towards the end of the poem. I really liked the word choice and the format was good. I gave it a 5/5.