Wonderful imagery in this one. Great use of words as well. I loved it. Good job. :]

Wow this poem is beautiful.. the word choice was excellent and really brings your poem to life.. it was a very enjoyable read.. and btw i think this is the correct category

Wonderful word choice, excellent vocabm the imagery was vivid, and painted a clear picture in my mind, the emtion was clear, and the flow was amzing. you did an excellent job once again 5/5

You can put this poem in either nature or society, in the catagory of inspiration or hope. well done with this. it flowed well and had a sense of magical imagry about it.

5/5 always, David

It was okay.
I mean, it could be better.
You should add punctuation to your poems.
It turns anything beautiful :P

All in all,
I loved that you were so discriptive.
It's very hard to do.
Your grammar was a bit off at points.
Your spelling's great.
Your flow seems a bit eccentric.
But still, 5/5?

It suited in this category to start as a comment and I'm sure everyoe feels this some days..feeling alone
My fave lines should be;

Gradually, the clouds begin to clear
Revealing a sky of serene blue
My once complicated mind refreshed
The smile on my face finally true.

It said a lot of things with just a four lines

Well done
Take care,
Laura

Amazing again! i really like your poetry, it seems to explain deeply which makes it so much better to read =) well done

Keep writing!

Love
Jacs
xxxx

Thats amazing the way things are imagined really shown the great flow n touch.
5/5

God bless u

This is so lovely, Tammie.
you have a wonderful imagination-and it shines through this amazing poem!
take care x.o.x