Can't have a Rainbow

by Wings Of Flames   May 29, 2007


"The sky is falling!"
Cries the hand,
Catching all these tears,
"No one understands!"

Cracks form in pictures,
All in window panes,
Hearts, heads and souls,
Even when it rains,

Splitting in divisions,
The sky really falls,
Feels like bloody skin,
And an ache into crawls,

Thinking what is thought,
Missing what is missed,
Crying what is cried,
Kissing what is kissed,

Blades dangle from the sky,
Like icicles in a storm,
Untouchables crying prejudice,
As tears always form,

You cannot have a storm,
Without a little rain,
You cannot have a rainbow,
Without a little pain.

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  • 17 years ago

    by firexdancer

    This was really amazing. it had it's own unique idea, which was totally not clique or anything. it flowed beautifully as well and had really good descriptions. 5/5
    gabriella

  • 17 years ago

    by gleizza

    Gosh...nice poem..!
    ^^

  • 17 years ago

    by Fsams

    You cannot have a storm,
    Without a little rain,
    You cannot have a rainbow,
    Without a little pain.

    These are very beautiful lines to read. The stanzas are very well written and Its enjoyable to read it. Your wordings are really flawless.

  • 17 years ago

    by Startle Me

    Honestly?
    Your whole poem seems forced and cliched.
    I'm tired of reading about tears.
    I've read about it too much..

    But your "story" my dear?
    I liked your first stanza.
    Even though it was off and forced.
    I liked when it was all.
    The sky is falling, cries the hand.
    That was very creative of you :P

    Thinking what is thought,
    Missing what is missed,
    Crying what is cried,
    Kissing what is kissed,

    Love that line.
    It was... perfecto

    You cannot have a storm,
    Without a little rain,
    You cannot have a rainbow,
    Without a little pain

    Hmm... I should take back what I said.
    This was.. pretty darn good.
    It wasn't the best.
    But it was pretty creative.
    Tears are always cliched in my eyes.
    So when I saw it, I ranted.
    Sorry.
    You deserve a five, my dear :]

  • 17 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    You cannot have a storm,
    Without a little rain,
    You cannot have a rainbow,
    Without a little pain.

    ^^this is soo true...very well said..it sums up the whole idea behind this poem..
    it flowed well..n i like the structure of this one...great work..short stanzas with perfect word choice
    Good job!
    xxPoojaxx