by Melissa May 29, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
It is not my fault |
by The WriTer
You kinda lost me the first stanza, so i was not drawn in. But since ur poem is number one, i thought i should go on. and i'm glad i did because i thought the metaphors to this old women (if i'm correct) is so perfectly personified. loved it. keep it up |
A well written Collaboration) |
Wow...excellent write...i adore your choice of words, it has this nice touch of sarcasm to it that proves most effective...great work guys |
by Timmy
Lovely lovely poetry |
by Debbie
This poem was very lovely indeed. A pleasurable read. Well done, both of you! (^^,) |