by amber May 29, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
This poem is about two best friends falling in love. I wrote a poem before it called, "More then a love poem" If you read that first this one will make more sense. I know its pretty long, but please read it! I would really love some feedback... |
by mimzy
Great work.. I like it! |
by Melpomene
I enjoyed this. I like how you made a second part to this like a sequel. It was amazingly written nice word choice and for someone who just started writing.. You have talent. Keep it up and u will produce better as u go along. ~mel |
by katie
This was excellent. i really, really liked it. <3 |