Comments : A Beautiful Lie

  • 17 years ago

    by katie

    This was excellent. i really, really liked it. <3

  • 17 years ago

    by Melpomene

    I enjoyed this. I like how you made a second part to this like a sequel. It was amazingly written nice word choice and for someone who just started writing.. You have talent. Keep it up and u will produce better as u go along. ~mel

  • 17 years ago

    by mimzy

    Great work.. I like it!