by ~*SugarCube*~ May 29, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
first love
You look past my imperfections, you stick by my side. |
by Jessica
Awh, this was good hunny. Okay, first of all. The flow was a bit off throughout the poem. Either the rhyme felt forced or the lines did not have the same amount of syllables roughly and this made it sound a bit off. Other than that, the descriptions were good and I could see how much you love this person. My only other suggestion is to break away from the cliche of love and try to explain it in a different way. 4/5 though, nice job. |
by Boy
Its romanting that was great work take care |
by Shauna
U stole my username :[. nice poem though. :D |
by Vanessa
The word choice was simple and yet effective, the emtion was stong yet clear, and the flow was great. you did an excellent job. keep it up |
by Teria
'Unconditional love, is what you provide.' < a bit short. |