It's not bull $#!T, it's actually pretty funny. I like the park when you sad Fly away cause no one wants you anyway lol. Great job
-vino

Hey...it is so nicely done..it is not a bull***t...it is very nice..
Keep up the good wrkk

Lols I really liked this one =) It's far from stupid like the title says and I totally relate to it ^_^ and late welcome to the site =) I hope you enjoy it as much as I do =D Theres a lot of great people on this site =)
Anyway, a wonderful poem and really fantastic for your first one on here =D Keep it up,
Rhea