by dawn green May 29, 2007
category :
Friendship, family /
family
You were born on a hot day in July |
by sadeyes
I love this poem I know what it is like to raise a child and how hard it is |
Excellent poem, love the emotional feeling in it and the story of bring up a child , well told , shows responsibility and respect needs to be learned , great job ,,, your friend Tracy 5/5 |
by Marc Ortiz
A great poem I like the rhyming. Flow was good for me! well done! |
by dawn green
To answer that yes he can be at times...like right now...but he is the kind of person he very good when he is good and you love him to death. but when he is bad...he is oh sooo bad...thanks for the comments and support! god bless |
by Ike Dizzle
This is funny. I like the part when you said straighten your butt up. And WIth that attitude you'll never have a wife. Great job. 5/5 |