by IdTakeABulletForYou May 29, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
The memories are all I have of time we spent as one. |
by thalia
Awesome!! |
by The WriTer
I agree with Vanessa ^------ up there at the top. you drew me in with the begining, because it was worded correctly, but i kinda lost touch with the second and third. but definatley made a come back with the forth. i'm not saying to remake ur poem to "make it sound better" bcus with me i hate to change a poem i think is so beautiful. but maybe next time, try to make a better flow |
by AMANDA M
Wow it's been a while since i've written but damn this poem is real nice, as soon as i get time i have to put mine on my page but don't have the time so check mine out sometime. |
by Cindy
You have written a beautiful poem. Love the imagery in this piece. |
by bella
Awesum poem keep up the good work |