Sky,
holding the world tight with clouds,
laughter in it's purest form,
the last piece of the universe,
so blue.
^^I liked this..specially the second last line
I liked the structure of this poem..Good job...n thoughtful selection of words...simple yet wel done!
Good job!
5/5
xxPoojaxx

I love this...I find it to be original and unique in concept, beautifully written, and I love the imagery you used, it creates very vivid pictures.
The ending is beautifully done, perfectly wrapped up and very intense.

This is a very descriptive poem. I sounded wonderful. it was well written and the flow was wonderful. 5/5

Kalee

Second stanza is beautiful written, but fourth stanza is still my favorite one. In this poem you created marvelous atmosphere. Your vocab is OUTSTANDING, you always impressed me. You are one of my favorite authors on the site. These peace is breath-taking, but I didn't like fist stanza very much. Anyway, your work deserves 5/5.