I like it you got to read my < i am your
disease> you will relate

I liked it!
Hmmm, maybe play around with words add some in take some out ya know.
To correct the flow in places.
I loved the ending "this i not fiction" nice.

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Wow! Thats deep.I love the way you throw urheart into what ur saying. Keep writing drugs/alcohol poems. they're rlly inspiring