Forgotten

by YoursTruly   May 29, 2007


Her eyes are red and watery,
Her skin is pale and white.
Her clothes are torn and dirty,
Her hair is black as night.

She was a good, popular girl,
Just until she died.
Now every night, in her sleep,
All she does is cry.

She never made it up to heaven,
Nor was sent down to hell.
She still wanders the earth now,
Lonely, longing help.

My eyes are red and watery,
My skin is pale and white.
My clothes are torn and dirty,
My hair is black as night.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Nina Star

    JAYNEY.
    I like this one. So I'm commenting again.
    Brilliant.

  • 16 years ago

    by LoveKeepsMeStrong

    The poem is amazing

    very describtive and stuff like that
    i was thinking of writing a poem like this one day

  • 17 years ago

    by xoxkatrinaxox

    Aw. i love this poem it is so good. keep it up:)

  • 17 years ago

    by Nina Star

    =O
    It's JADE!

    Lol not really, bt I really like this one too. I like the description of the girl hehe.