by xoxShorteexox May 29, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
Her eyes have the brightest stars in them, |
by MaSkEdSoUl
Really cute! I liked it, it flowed and rhymed good. But one thing, on the last line maybe you should take off 'be'. It'll sound better. Well done! |
Wow!!...such a cute write filled with passion in every single line....Very well chosen words! |
by Liz
Aww i really liked that!!! |