Aww i really liked that!!!
5/5
~Liz

Wow!!...such a cute write filled with passion in every single line....Very well chosen words!
Sweet work!

5/5
Kp writing!
xxPoojaxx

Really cute! I liked it, it flowed and rhymed good. But one thing, on the last line maybe you should take off 'be'. It'll sound better. Well done!