Its a good poem. Write more. Vote=4/5

Again I say to you as I read this poem once more. It's a good poem, by near ending I can see you truly adore this... golden haired blue eyed character... If this poem is a cry out for someone to listen then I shall listen happily. Again, like I said, write more! Never be afraid to shout out your emotions you feel toward someone. Speak out. Cannot Vote Again but... I still say its a good poem no doubt.

Sincerely.
[Deathly'Amore]

Thanks 4 wat u said im only 13 and im going to be a wruter even kno im young i have went though a lot thanks u really made my day and your a exelent wright pleaze read my poem the heart burn it was a poem about my last u kno wat thanks luv and u really live up their i live in florda so alot of ppl have talent thanks :)