Heartflet, touching and really sad. I hope that this isn't a true story, and if it is I am sorry for your loss.
My favorite staza is
I miss how you tease me
Chasing me around the yard
I put the pictures of you, face down
"God?...Why does this have to be so hard..?"
the last line of this staza delivered so much power, and the last line of the poem delivered so much strength. The emtion was strong, and the flow was perfect 5/5 although I wish I could give you more.

You explained everything quite well the visual was good but the flow was choppy at best it did not seem to flow at all. I think with a bigger vocab and more use of words that differ but explain the same the poem would hold more power but nice try Plot121

Aww. this was so sweet. so sad.
your flow was gorgeous, vocabulary and emotions were amazing...
lol. the only thing i found fault in was in the last sequence, (you spelled our wrong)
besides that it was a truly wonderful poem, you can see the picture in your head as you read it. beautiful
5/5
gabriella

Wow!!...i mean I am speechless..really really beautiful...soo so sad n touching...u literally gave a clear picture ..n the emotion portrayed thru the lines was really strong
Excellent write!..5/5=)
xxPoojaxx

Great poem. It's really sad. I loved the flow. It is a long poem but you made it work. 5/5

Really emotional. you put a lot of emotions in this and you can definantly feel them as you read the poem.

all but 2 (i think) stanzas are rhyming... it kind of throws it off. i like it when it all rhymes. but it's not a big deal.

great job!

Thats pretty much me right now......nice poem you have some talent keep it up....5/5