by George May 29, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
What is it lies within your soul, |
by MyEscape
WOW! That last line is great! We all would rather have the truth, no matter how it hurts, than to live our lives unaware of how others truly feel. Good job! |
by Gypsy
Your use of language and rhyme in this is superb, and it flowed really well too. |