I love reading that. I felt it was deeply touching and emotional. Definately a diamond in the rough.

A very poignant poem =) it had great meaning and flowed smoothly =)
{5/5}
- Nicole xx

Powerful and meaningful from the beginning to the end. I like how you wrote this- it is very effective and filled with greatly expressed emotions in every line. I can relate to this piece in a way which makes it even more powerful for me.
Greatly done!