Warrior

by Ash   May 29, 2007


Let the stress steam out
It's getting so hard
I'm beginning to worry
And it hurts my heart

They don't care how much you do
Selfish, ridiculous, and completely rude
But forget about them and their thoughts
Because your love and faith is just enough

I can see you slipping every now and then
Day by day you lose a little faith
You crumble to the ground and fall to pieces
You feel so useless and like nothing is worth it

Is giving up and letting go
Going to make any of this better?
Is letting them over power and hurt you
Going to make you that much stronger?

Because when i look at you
I see such a mighty and courageous guy
You deserve more than you earn
And they lack what you've got

Times have been more than tough
And i know you've been so beat down you just want to give up
Hang on for just a little longer
Because in my eyes you are the greatest warrior.

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  • 17 years ago

    by dollwithafrown

    Capitalise your I's. :]

    This was a very sweet poem. Strong emotions and overall it was well written. Good job.

  • 17 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Sweet peom....it held strong emotions in every line..n u've penned the meanong thru this poem beautifully...
    Good job on this one..
    5/5=)

    xxPoojaxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Melpomene

    This poem was quite sweet with a good meaning portrayed behind it. The emotion was strong and i found this to be very well written. One thing i think you should do though is capitalize each letter of each line. It makes the poem look a little neater. Other then that well done on this~Mel