by Ash May 29, 2007
category :
Friendship, family /
other
Let the stress steam out |
Capitalise your I's. :] |
Sweet peom....it held strong emotions in every line..n u've penned the meanong thru this poem beautifully... |
by Melpomene
This poem was quite sweet with a good meaning portrayed behind it. The emotion was strong and i found this to be very well written. One thing i think you should do though is capitalize each letter of each line. It makes the poem look a little neater. Other then that well done on this~Mel |