This poem was quite sweet with a good meaning portrayed behind it. The emotion was strong and i found this to be very well written. One thing i think you should do though is capitalize each letter of each line. It makes the poem look a little neater. Other then that well done on this~Mel

Sweet peom....it held strong emotions in every line..n u've penned the meanong thru this poem beautifully...
Good job on this one..
5/5=)

xxPoojaxx

Capitalise your I's. :]

This was a very sweet poem. Strong emotions and overall it was well written. Good job.