That's a good poem. I liked the ending part. Great job. 5/5
-vino

Gasttlee
Great job on this piece. Such deep emotions come from your words.

Only one part of me remains.
The identity I hid for so long.

Who am I?
Just simply
Gasttlee.

Loved your ending.
Excellent
Take care Cindy

Deep, sad and so touchingly honest... 5/5

Great job on such a deeply wriiten peice. the vocab was amazing the word choice was awesome, the emtion was powerful, the flow was flawless and the message was clear another great job 5/5

Good job!..well penned...sad and filled with emotions...Nice write!
Beautifully written touching poem about your identity...=)
xxPoojaxx

Filled with so many emotions. And like ahh it was just so good! Liked the thoughts in this.
Very amazing write! :)
5/5

It's really great as all your other poems but i felt that your rhyming scheme changed, it's really good!

This poem was filled with emotions.it was great.iit ws sad but yet wonderful.good job in this piece.it was so touching and heart breaking.the ending was great.
and thank you for your comment on my poems.
best wishes
and take care
emmeline

I liked "I am ham
sliced in many pieces", this
was a different from the rest
of the poem and was so surreal.

So powerful, great wording. I like the ending, and the form of the poem.
Another one unique and well written.

Great poem,i dont know who i am eather

I can relate to this-I've always felt the tragic, romantic, dreamer, loner syndrome. This poem really strikes a chord deep within me. Very well written. An excellent piece.

Peace, Poetry & Power,

Gary Jurechka

This was a beautiful, well written poem

these lines made me smile
I am ham
sliced in many pieces.
so much so infact.. i went and ate ham
5/5 xxx

That was fantastic and I totally understand it ^_^ Great job on writing it =) The wording was great, the flow was also really good =) 5/5
Rhea

Great, I also have a poem called Who am I... This one is great Keep it up

I can relate to this poem A LOT! you are a very talented writer. the words were very good...keep it up and thanks for your comments.\
BabyGurl

(: I like it, a lot.
The meaning is really good, I know many people who feel this way.
I use to be one, still am to a point.

Just know, you're human and loved.
Even if you don't realize it.

Great portrayl of emotions here. I love the orginality of it while still I'm sure many people can relate to it. Great read. 5/5

marcella

Nice ending!

Wow what a sad poem
alot of ppl have to deal with my an outsider
and thats sad
5/5

<3 i love you silly