Teddi bear.......

by G me   May 30, 2007


Teddi bear in hand
tears drippin from my face
while my broken heart bleed wit in
sadness in my soul
sarrow in my eyes
wit stress on my mind
whats left to be come of me and my life

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  • 17 years ago

    by AMoreMIo

    Good job ..i like how in the beginning you used the teady bear thing...and never metioned it again it had a nice affect to the poem ..i like it alot..! showed good emotion

  • 17 years ago

    by G me

    Thanks

  • 17 years ago

    by Tracy D Rollings

    Great write, with a lot of emotional feelings like that. Like your style, keep it up ,~5/5~ your friend Tracy

  • 17 years ago

    by Tiffany Nichole

    Good poem!

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