Comments : Frown in the coffin

  • 17 years ago

    by Anti Mankind

    I think this poem is very interesting, it has a certain erieeness to it, because the way it is formatted made me think of it like a children's song.

    I kind of read it to the tune that you would sing 'One two, buckle my shoe'

    I think that had a great hook on it.

    Keep up the good work.