War with a friend

by The Sky is Falling   May 30, 2007


You have declared war on the wrong person.
Your jealously will hurt one in need.
I hope that doesnt hurt a friend indeed.
You took it the wrong way,
There is no treaty in getting my way.
What you want,
And what you need.
That is something you need to see.
You need your friends,
And not your enemies.
Declaring war on me,
Is showing off your jealousy!

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  • 17 years ago

    by mistressxsork

    I laughed while I was reading this poem.. only because I thought it was a funny way of putting out what you were trying to say.

    Overall, it probably could use a lot more work.. but; it's your poetry. Do as you please.

    Good work.. 4.0/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Run out of words

    Haha..that's a very cute poem. It really suits the state I am in right now, so even if it wasnt as amazing * as it is* I'd give it a 5/5. But it desevres more than that...because I think everyone really, can relate to it. You've captured emotions in words. That's beautiful.

  • 17 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Good job...nice work..yeah i guess there is a typo error..maybe u consider revising your work..the poem will look better if tht error is not there..Good job otherwise...n u've stated true facts in this one..There is no point fighting with a friend,..it ends in a bad way=(
    Lol..Good job!
    xxPoojaxx

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