Good job...nice work..yeah i guess there is a typo error..maybe u consider revising your work..the poem will look better if tht error is not there..Good job otherwise...n u've stated true facts in this one..There is no point fighting with a friend,..it ends in a bad way=(
Lol..Good job!
xxPoojaxx

Haha..that's a very cute poem. It really suits the state I am in right now, so even if it wasnt as amazing * as it is* I'd give it a 5/5. But it desevres more than that...because I think everyone really, can relate to it. You've captured emotions in words. That's beautiful.

I laughed while I was reading this poem.. only because I thought it was a funny way of putting out what you were trying to say.

Overall, it probably could use a lot more work.. but; it's your poetry. Do as you please.

Good work.. 4.0/5