No daddy

by Shy   May 30, 2007


Shes awakened with a shake to find her baby sister beaten and bruised
she picks up the blanket and says "come on"
holding back the tears
her sister hops in bed
she knows just what happened
her sister says "Daddy did it again"
she soothes her to sleep
as tears
start rolling down her cheek
she can remember when that was her
she wishes she could replace her sister
when sadness turns to anger
she gets up
oh so quietly
goes to her daddy's gun case
grabs a pistol
walks to his room
aims it at his head
and pulls the trigger with no remource
saying "i said no daddy!"

* leave me a comment and tell me what you think plz*

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  • 17 years ago

    by Ike Dizzle

    Aww that's messed up lol. It's not funny but it has a humorous twist at the end. Great job. 5/5
    -vino

    I'm not laughing because he was shot in the head I'm laughing because i thought of it as a cartoon in my head lol.

  • 17 years ago

    by bacha

    Iiii loved it :):)

    it happin some time good work for writing it:):):)

    keep on girl:)