I like your poem...it shows feeling.. its always good to look at someone for who they are...like this girl you talk about...real good..keep it up

This is a great poem...I hope you can stay with "that girl" she sounds very special to you...the best of luck to you wit the poetry and the girl

sincerely yours,

uwouldntno

I liked this one...it had lots of emotions through out and ...the whole poem stands out well and has it's charm
It's very well penned
Good job on this one!

5/5
xxPoojaxx

Well, if i'm being honest. I dont think this one flowed too well, maybe if it was broke itnto stanza's it might sound better, but thats your choice.
I did like this one and i felt the emotion, 4/5 on this one, my friend
best wishes,
Tara-Kay