Behind Smiles [Senryu]

by Tammie   May 30, 2007


Behind every smile
Something's buried deep inside
Veiled from exposure

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Senryu is an unrhymed Japanese verse consisting of three unrhymed lines of five, seven, and five syllables (5, 7, 5). Senryu is usually written in the present tense and only references to some aspect of human nature or emotions.

* Although Veiled sounds like it is two syllables, I checked it in the dictionary and it says it is one. Just to verify that. =P *

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  • 17 years ago

    by Melpomene

    Short and sweet. Truely powerful. You are very good with words and know how to portrayed them with such deep and powerful emotion. Another unique poem you have here which you have added an amazing touch too. I truely loved reading this piece which you have perfectly penned. Well done~mel

  • 17 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Powerful, really amazing.
    Unique writing. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by David

    Short and meaningful. well done. yeah i thought that veiled could have either 1 or 2. depends on how you say it.

    5/5 David

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