I like this poem a lot, especially this line:

Sitting on the beach
Red Flowers surround me from all the side
Coldness of the waves touch me
Drop of the damp fall on my face
Suddenly a feeling taken over my mind
Slowly I saw the moon light
& the mountain standing high
And you came in my mind

Awsome job! 5/5

~Lizzie~

Wow i really like it!
you're a talented writer!
thanks for commenting on my poem

xoxo sabrina

I absolutely love this poem, you hate a talent, keep it up dear!