Omg babe u are amazing this one is awsum!
i dnt even know wot 2 say
totally understand where ur cumin frm!
peace out!
xXx

Brilliant, absolute genious. runs real deep, and has great meaning that really hits you as you read it.

and i'm sure beauty aint wasted on u!

keep it up (and whats this about "brighter poems"?)

I like it..plus i no wat that all feels like!
jasman

Do you ever look into the mirror and want to turn away?
You tell them all that you are fine but lies are all you say.
~fav bit~

5/5 great poem

OMGosh this is an awesome poem.
A great rhyme scheme and an awesome choice of adjectives.
It is a fairly sad poem, but one of the best i have ever read
keep writting,you will surly go far and may god bless!

Really liked it, good rhyme and flow and a good message =] (I wish I could look into the mirror and SEE a pretty face haha, let alone hate it)