I really liked it, especially the the las stanza. Hang in there. It gets a little easier, I promise. -T. Jane

This is really sad...it's so awful, when you world looks perfect and then the person you loved the most dies...
this is a beautiful way to explain it...
5/5
keep going
*isabel*

Aww Kelly this poem is so sad, hang in there girl, I can't imagine the pain of losing someone you love this way its very sad and heartbreaking. If this poem is true, I hope your okay, and although things may never be what they were before eventually they will get better just stay strong. 5/5

Dearest Kelly,
you poems always blow me away, the emotions that floods thru every word is like a never ending torent, each poem relly shows the pain and i wish there was something i could do but i implore you to keep writing, i'll keep reading, again 5/5 for this poem :) like you its amazingly perfect in every way :)

Excellent poem ,full of heartache and pain, can feel it from your writing, love this and Trust me I can relate ,you are very talented love your poems,keep it up great job, your friend Tracy thanks 5/5

Wow, this poem is written very well. I love it. Though it's sad. I still think you did a great job 5/5
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Wait... i think i understand this now.

I read it through and i was thinking, some cow has stolen him away but then the last line hit me like a sledgehammer.
Was it God that took him away...

I may be completely wrong so please let me know.
But what a powerful piece either way..
Well done
5/5
*Gem*