Love sucker with a broken heart

by Tracy D Rollings   May 30, 2007


To the one that once loved me
and made me feel whole
gave me hope like it should be
made plans for us to grow old.

We shared happy times together
spent timeless hours just talking
said you would adore me forever
now you turn and start walking.

Said you had problem's, wouldn't understand
you were depressed couldn't talk
now I'm a troubled man
feel it's all my fault.

At least let me know
whats on your mind
before you have to go
please stop I'm dying.

Must it end this way
turn around and your gone
you have nothing to say
turned my heart to stone.

A love that tried hard
built a world around you
dealt me the wrong card
I lose now, it's true.©2007 Tracydr42

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  • 17 years ago

    by Chelsey

    This poem actually gave me a bit of a scare because I'm just now committed to someone at 16 years old and we seem to think we're gunna make so far but I'm so scared for a heartbreak like the one you have described here....Cindy pointed out my favorite stanza.....what a horrible feeling anyone must go through and I pray to God I'd never have to go through it......Loved this poem, your heart just spilt on the paper...
    Chelsey

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Tracy
    Great job on this piece. You can feel the sadness sourronding you.

    A love that tried hard
    built a world around you
    dealt me the wrong card
    I lose now, it's true.

    These lines are heart wrenching :(
    Take care Cindy

  • 17 years ago

    by Robyn

    This was really great lots of heart and hurt u could feel it just from reading it i really liked it!
    robyn xoxo

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