This was really great lots of heart and hurt u could feel it just from reading it i really liked it!
robyn xoxo

Tracy
Great job on this piece. You can feel the sadness sourronding you.

A love that tried hard
built a world around you
dealt me the wrong card
I lose now, it's true.

These lines are heart wrenching :(
Take care Cindy

This poem actually gave me a bit of a scare because I'm just now committed to someone at 16 years old and we seem to think we're gunna make so far but I'm so scared for a heartbreak like the one you have described here....Cindy pointed out my favorite stanza.....what a horrible feeling anyone must go through and I pray to God I'd never have to go through it......Loved this poem, your heart just spilt on the paper...
Chelsey