First off i want to say that was a really really awesome poem i really liked it i think it's about how a person gets belittled, put down, abused by another person and the whole poem is waiting for the one who is delt this to become free or i am really really wrong i think i am :]

No no. I wrote it because I wanted to make you think of what you thought of it. I just wanted to hear how many stories that could come out of this poem.

No one is wrong.

Another misterious poem ^^
I think, "Morning" is freedom.
The man forces her to do whatever he wants and abuses her, but he keeps lying to others.
Yeah, I don't know exactly what's the meaning.
You make me like an idiot. ^^
Great...

Excellent poem sad I must say great flow and vocabulary was great, awesome job keep it up , your friend Tracy dean 5/5 .... good to see you again