by dawn green May 30, 2007
category :
Life, society /
about society
When I think back to that fateful day |
by Salwa
TRULY a wonderful, emotion felt poem.....you have said what MANY people around the world are thinking and feeling.....you are the voice for those that perished that day.....i don't even know you, and feel PROUD to have been able to read that....... |
by The WriTer
Thank you for commenting my poem. So i'd like to comment urs. I think its great to write about something this powerful. I ususally just write about my feelings, not any national issues. So i'm glad someone has that capablity. anyways, its very suprising for me to see that a "41" yearold women has such great writing, and is even on this site. usually all the people i meet, are around my own age. its a refreshing complement to poetry. keep up the good work, keep inspiring and saving others from that horrible day. |
by Nicole
Thank you for your comment, concerns, and your offer. actually i am getting help...i'm going thru therapy for anorexia, and i've been getting help from a doctor to regain my weight back. i lost so much weight and i no it's not healthy but it's so hard to fight the guilt of gaining weight or eating. but anyway, thanks again...and GREAT POEM! it's such an inspiration poem i love it! |
You speak from the heart, Dawn. I admit to having withdrawn when the dust from 9/11 settled. I felt helpless until I picked up my pen. |
WOW that was awesome, and flow was great in it, love the whole thing and the story sad but so true, love your poem and wording was great, glad to see someone remember , thanks for sharing , your friend Tracy 5/5 |