Beautiful job, :'( sad day... 9 -11, 5/5

-love whitney-

This is a awesome poem wow super good though i dont totally agree with the line that says that you people were/are the greatest nation in the world but the poem is good and has alot of meaning really well done i hope more people read this

thanks for the comment also
and you dont look 40 something in your profile pic lol
keenan

Hi!
First let me say thank for the great comments! Ithought that I may get some heat for that line (the greatest nation in the world) however the reason I put that in there and by no means is it because I think so but because this is all of the media hype. So okay now I feel better!
God bless you all!

A beautiful tribute, nonetheless. =]

Take care.

September 11 rocked the world to it's core I just don't think things will be the same 5/5 Steve

WOW that was awesome, and flow was great in it, love the whole thing and the story sad but so true, love your poem and wording was great, glad to see someone remember , thanks for sharing , your friend Tracy 5/5

You speak from the heart, Dawn. I admit to having withdrawn when the dust from 9/11 settled. I felt helpless until I picked up my pen.

Words live on after us, and those who remember the devastation shall give them to infinity.

Thank you for your comment, concerns, and your offer. actually i am getting help...i'm going thru therapy for anorexia, and i've been getting help from a doctor to regain my weight back. i lost so much weight and i no it's not healthy but it's so hard to fight the guilt of gaining weight or eating. but anyway, thanks again...and GREAT POEM! it's such an inspiration poem i love it!

Thank you for commenting my poem. So i'd like to comment urs. I think its great to write about something this powerful. I ususally just write about my feelings, not any national issues. So i'm glad someone has that capablity. anyways, its very suprising for me to see that a "41" yearold women has such great writing, and is even on this site. usually all the people i meet, are around my own age. its a refreshing complement to poetry. keep up the good work, keep inspiring and saving others from that horrible day.
-Writer

TRULY a wonderful, emotion felt poem.....you have said what MANY people around the world are thinking and feeling.....you are the voice for those that perished that day.....i don't even know you, and feel PROUD to have been able to read that.......

peace to you and yours.....
salwa