Witten amazingly! I loved it! But it mad me sad... Keep up the great work. 5/5

Tracy
Very sad piece...deep emotions reflect from your words.

Now feel at home again
pain ease's for a while
heart broken,soul gone
body empty,no smile.

These lines I can relate to.
Take Care Cindy

Wow!! This is powerful. I think it is truly amazing. Great use of words.

Now feel at home again
pain ease's for a while
heart broken,soul gone
body empty,no smile
^^Wow!!Beautuful ending very touching.. filled with emotions and really powerful
Superb write!
Kp it up!
xxPoojaxx

Wow this was a wonderful poem fill of a lot of saddness and hurt i really liked it!
robyn xoxo

Woah now this a poem. I love it, had to read it more than once. I think it is so deep and just amazing!!

"Misery is Thaine own mother
long as I must live
torture is thy hard father
no more love to give."

That was my favourite part. Just brilliant.

Kelly
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I like it, it's full of emotions. Great imagery. Every stanza holds a little bit of a pain mixed with a darkness. 5/5

-Play time in there world
haunting empty souls float about
going deeper into sleep
knowing there's no way out.- great stanza.
Wow, unique and beautifully written poem. Very good imagery, it is excellent, 5/5.

Really dark peace. First stanza is incredible. Last two stanzas are also excellently written. Rhyming is superb and unique. It deserves 5/5.