This was awesome. But the situation was sad. Everyone who does someone else wrong will get what they deserve and you'll be happy with another guy. Great job. 5/5
-vino

Awwww thats was sad but in this poem u told a story, i really liked it and even though it didnt ryhm ( not saying it was bad) it flowed which was AWSOME i really liked it!!
5/5 always
Kate~