Lovely. Quite metaphorical, eh? My instinct was to believe this was [obviously] about drugs of some form. However, it was entirely of a different nature.

Wonderful.

This is a great poem...i like your choice of words...it was short but worth the read...

nice work.5/5

While your hand shakes my heart shivers like an earthquake. It is always a relief to get everything out on paper (or the screen).

As a writer it is the best thing for me to turn my inner thoughts, emotions, and feelings into a simple piece of literature than can reach many.

Again well done. I really like your style and I must admit that it is refreshing.

--Sher

Again, short but the message it pointed out perfectly, i love the descriptive words you use. this poem was awesome, a topic i have never read about but i loved it. 5/5