Comments : The Lights That Flicker Will Fade.

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    Oh my! I'm so shocked this has no comments yet! It's amazing and what a fantastic title!

    "Reality has gotten the best of us it seems
    Oh all the things we can't undo,
    As our memories fade away into the past,
    The bright light just doesn't shine like it used to."

    My favourite stanza, it said so so much and what fab imagery you churned into this piece..
    You should be proud of this one
    5/5
    *Gem*